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November 1st, 2011, 1:01 am

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shutupadrian, October 31st, 2011, 10:54 pm ( Reply )

What did Aiza do? - So there have been some questions as to exactly what happened between Aiza and Kinnie in the preceding pages, but before I explain that, I want to explain something else first.

You see, keeping it vague was intentional. I felt that if I had over-explained things, some of the mystery and - dare I say it - "magic" would have been taken out of the storytelling.

But maybe I miscalculated? I am by no means an experienced author, so this might be a mistake to learn from. Do you feel that I really should have shown exactly how Aiza retrieved her talent from Kinnie? Or is it enough to know that 'mysterious forces' were at work?

Or maybe I'm misunderstanding where the confusion is coming? Was it just a matter that the 'sequential' part of the art was lacking?

Of course, if you want to speculate as to what happened and how it happened, I'm not stopping anyone from commenting below.

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It seams like you did well in conveying Aiza taking back her powers. and if you wanted it to be mysterious I say you did well from what the comments on the last page say. though it would be nice to see Kinnie is actually alright or if there were any affects from Aiza taking her powers back. Because it looked like Kinnie was going a little crazy from the gaining the dark shadow power. so a fallow up would be nice, even if its just a small line by one of the characters.

posted by GryphonsShadow on November 1st, 2011, 1:30 am



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Don't tell us anything just keep drawing.

posted by Boredom (Guest) on November 2nd, 2011, 12:15 am





 
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Thanks for the comments. All this definitely gives me something to learn from moving forward.

posted by shutupadrian on November 2nd, 2011, 10:44 pm



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